I gotta be honest here. This is one of the best artworks of Hibari I've seen yet. KHR is one of my favorite anime. This is exactly how you would picture Hibari as a lover. He would be intense, unrestrained, and completely over-whelming. He would also be very dominant. Again, very well done. Also, Haru would be shocked just like this. I think you captured these two characters brilliantly.